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Ian Winter's avatar

I like the mystery of whatever went down with Mary and Tony on the moor.

Tricky to write “northern” as there are so many dialects. I think I’m over-Sheffielding it, kept stumbling on the “with” that would be shorter – “wi’ some kids”.

Courtenay Schembri Gray ✰'s avatar

I think it depends! I’m Greater Manchester way and a lot of us speak like this! But every person can be so different!

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

I very much enjoyed the use of the Northern dialect here. It lends the piece a distinctive character and gives it a personality entirely its own.